Thanks Scott! It's very nicely put together. I have some specific comments/questions & hopefully others on the board will too. I didn't get your 2nd email before printing out the first version, so I'll refer to section #'s: End of section 1: Selection will also be made based on the feasibility of the proposal and the strength & reputation of the local club. 2.2.1: Videotaping has never been a requirement, just an optional thing I've done. Maybe change wording to reflect this. 2.2.3: Recognition letters; should they also be sent to sponsors? 2.5.1: Strike references to awards in the Banquet. We have announced the aquascaping awards, but I think of that as a "per-conference" thing to be worked out. Perhaps it should read "Saturday night banquet - may include announcements, awards, recognition, and a guest speaker". Or maybe just "Saturday night banquet". 2.6.22: This seems too complicated for a convention of this size. I would strike it completely. 2.6.3: Is the roundtable a requirement? Personally, I'd sacrifice the roundtable for a collecting trip, for instance. Maybe change wording to "may" instead of "will"? 2.7.1.1.1: Should this be one level out? i.e. 2.7.1.2 2.7.2 "for example, a fish and dry goods auction," between 2.7.3 and 2.7.4 : Add new paragraph "Sellers must be AGA or Local members unless they wish to donate their proceeds." ? GUIDELINES section.. "CONFERENCE CHAIRPERSON" is in a different style than the other sections. Also _AUCTION_ is underlined. SPONSORSHIP, 2nd paragraph. The b) category isn't relevant to our convention. Likewise, the recurring bit about advertising in the convention booklet is probably not relevant either, because it's such a small convention. Instead we have companies who pay for booths in the vendor room. So also take out the paragraph that starts at the bottom of the page about Ad rates. I didn't find any info about the silent auction. Hotel info, "Try to get the hotel to give you as many free rooms (for speakers) as possible to sponsor an early bird draw or anything else you can think of." I don't understand what that means, early bird draw. MARKETING, PUBLICATION and ADVERTISING Starting with "Advertising must be sought early and eaggresively" through "Money can also be saved if you and your volunteers do folding and stapling"... this all seems not to be relevant. Again, my thinking is that this is a small convention, we can do a simple xeroxed convention booklet. SPEAKER PROGRAM Distinguish between "transportation to and from the banquet" and airfare. Maybe just add a sentence saying airfare for the keynote speaker should be paid (though not required for the other spekaers). Next paragraph, talking about speaker bookings, modify paragraph to include requests for a photo, and that it's important to get it early for flyers, website and other advance PR. "Make sure the speakers and judges.." Take out "and judges" REGISTRATION "Doing both tickets and bookets at the same time..." Tickets? Maybe take out that sentence. Last sentence of section ends abruptly "AT the registration table, have name tags for all preregistered attendees and a few blank tags for." TREASURER Maybe add "investigate accepting payments by credit card if possible". That's all so far... Thanks Scott! - Erik -- Erik Olson erik at thekrib dot com ------------------ To unsubscribe from this list, e-mail majordomo@thekrib.com with "unsubscribe aga-sc" in the body of the message. Old messages are available at http://lists.thekrib.com/aga-sc When asked, log in as username is "aga-sc", and password "incorp".