Hi Cheryl, Looks good, except that we shouldn't say "in North America". We've worked very hard to maintain our international status, and shouldn't back away from that in an ad. I suspect we could accurately say "the world's largest", but if we don't want to go out on a limb, we could say the "the world's largest English language..." Karen ----- Original Message ----- From: "Cheryl Rogers" <cheryl@wilstream.com> To: <aga-sc@thekrib.com> Sent: Thursday, August 19, 2004 10:29 PM Subject: [AGA-sc] Re: [AGA SC] AFM Ads > I called this lady and got the specs. Don't get excited, it's just a > classified, but hey, free is free. They want 40 words. > > I put Phil to work on it, because I was tremendously busy at the time and > he was asking for something to do. Here is what he came up with. I think > it's just fine. > > > Cheryl, > > > > Here are the advertisements for AFM. Could you please proof them? My grammar is terrible. > > > > Are you interested in Planted Aquaria? The Aquatic Gardeners Association, North America's largest planted aquarium organization, is growing with the hobby and would like you to grow with us. Check out www.aquatic-gardeners.org more information. > > > > The Charlotte Area Aquarists Society, www.aquacharlotte.com, is looking for aquarists of all interests in the Charlotte, NC region. It doesn't matter what type of aquaria you're interested in, CAAS, is interested in you. www.aquacharlotte.com > > > > CAPE, North Carolina's largest Planted Aquarium club would like to invite you to join us. We're a no cost, no stress aquatic gardeners club who get together to share the hobby. Visit http://www.fishclubs.com/nc/cape/main.html > > > > MAN! 40 words or less is harder than I thought it would be. Oh, and don't worry about extending my membership, it's my job to get folks to join. Speaking of which, I need to be renewing soon, don't I? > > > > Thanks, > > Phil > > > Karen Randall wrote: > > > Hi Folks, > > > > A person from AFM called and left a message saying that they were now > > offering free ads for aquarium societies. I thought you'd all like to > > know. The contact person's name is Amy, and the phone number is: > > > > (800)546-7730 X4123 > > > > It's _POSSIBLE_ that there's still time to get an ad in in time for > > November... > > > > Karen > > -- > Cheryl Rogers, Membership > Aquatic Gardeners Association > http://www.aquatic-gardeners.org > > _______________________________________________ > AGA-sc mailing list > AGA-sc@thekrib.com > http://lists.thekrib.com/mailman/listinfo/aga-sc > _______________________________________________ AGA-sc mailing list AGA-sc@thekrib.com http://lists.thekrib.com/mailman/listinfo/aga-sc