I think you might want to check a French-English dictionary for the proper salutation and introduction for a formal letter... "Cher" means "dear" but it is a little more personal than what would be appropriate for someone you don't know (if I recall).
One thing that is pretty universally true with much of the non-English world -- most of them (western Europeans especially) speak and read English way better than most American's speak their languages!! They start earlier in school etc. The funny thing about many of the French is that many of them can be rather snobby about their own language and not wish to use English, even though they know it... I have some funny stories involving this fact from the semester I lived in Dijon... So, you could probably send the English version, and most would probably be able to understand it. Or send both. It will be pretty obvious to a French person that you used a translator though.
HTH, Tony
From: "Dave VanderWall" <dave@vanderwall.org> Reply-To: aga-contest@thekrib.com To: <aga-contest@thekrib.com> Subject: Initial contact email in ... French? Date: Wed, 24 Apr 2002 23:20:58 -0500 Hi, Google has this translator for web pages (perhaps some of you have seen it). Here is what the initial contact email looks like in French, which I of course don?t read or speak: ************* Concours Aquatique D'Aquascaping D'Association De 2002 Jardiniers Cher (nom) L'association aquatique de jardiniers est une organisation internationale des fervents d'usine aquatique consacrés à augmenter l'intérêt dans et la connaissance des usines aquatiques et de leur entretien dans des aquariums et des étangs de jardin. L'cAga produit un journal bimensuel appelé le jardinier aquatique et maintient un site Web à http://www.aquatic-gardeners.org/. Tous les ans, l'cAga tient deux événements principaux: - le concours international d'cAga Aquascaping, un enchaînement a basé l'étalage de planté et aquascaped des aquariums, - la conférence d'cAga, une occasion pour que les amateurs rencontrent et d'entendent d'autres fervents et experts discuter tous les aspects du jardinage aquatique. La conférence de cette année sera tenue à Houston, le Texas en novembre. Des détails de ces deux événements peuvent être trouvés sur le site Web d'cAga. Il est tout à fait possible que les membres de votre groupe seront intéressés par un ou tous les deux événements et/ou l'organisation elle-même. Nous compilons une liste de email address d'autant de groupes et sociétés d'amateur comme possible les avons laissés savoir de nos efforts et encourager leur participation. Nous serions heureux de vous envoyer le matériel promotionnel pour ces événements par l'intermédiaire d'email pour la distribution à vos membres. Veuillez confirmer la personne correcte de contact pour votre groupe (nom et email address). Le passe-temps d'aquarium a été toujours basé sur le partage de nos intérêts mutuels. Nous du voudrions encourager les membres de votre groupe à nous joindre et promouvons l'appréciation les aquariums et jardinage aquatique. Si vous avez n'importe quelles questions, contactez-svp nous. Nous vous prions d'agréer l'expression de nos salutations distinguées, ************** Anyone read French? Is it close? I really like the "Yours Truly" part, which is the last line. Now, call me crazy, (please, because I don't want to have to answer an email in a language I don't understand) but there is a web site chock full o' international clubs. Do I dare seek them out? The site is http://www.i-focas.ic24.net/WORLD%20FISH%20CLUBS.htm (VERY slow to load!) I'm in the process of weeding out all of the English-speaking clubs. I think I could safely send what we have to the Netherlands. Or I could just send everyone the English version and see what happens. Better yet, send the announcement when we are ready. ;-) Any thoughts? One other detail, Google only translates English to Portuguese, French, Italian, German or Spanish. Not sure if there are other translators, but I'm guessing a translation to Chinese, Japanese, Dutch, etc., would be difficult and sloppy at best. Somewhat of an insult at worst, I suppose. * Tip for future contact folks: Visit whatever web site is listed and get the email address from there. Usually it is different from the email listing on the directory site. Hello! :-) Crazy Dave V. (sort of wishing he took something other than Latin) ------------------ To unsubscribe from this list, e-mail majordomo@thekrib.com with "unsubscribe aga-contest" in the body of the message. To subscribe to the digest version, add "subscribe aga-contest-digest" in the same message. Old messages are available at http://lists.thekrib.com/aga-contest When asked, log in as username is "aga-contest", and password "second".
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