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Re: [AGA-mcm] Juggling
- To: AGA Advisory Committee <aga-mcm@thekrib.com>
- Subject: Re: [AGA-mcm] Juggling
- From: "S. Hieber" <shieber@yahoo.com>
- Date: Thu, 14 Jul 2005 13:05:29 -0700 (PDT)
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--- Cheryl Rogers <cheryl@rightstuffwebsites.com> wrote:
> Okay. On the phone, Scott also volunteered to help print.
I've been outed, drat!
>
> Don't start printing yet. Give me a couple of days to get
> changes made
> and new photos in.
Quick note. Ask Ben for one last edit to eliminate
unnecessary words. A tedious but important task. This is
not a criticism on Ben's piece -- it's a general coment --
I haven't seen a piece of writing yet that couldn't be put
through one additional wash to replace adjectival
prepositons with one-word adjectives, etc. to reduce the
word count. Also make the langauge more powerful, more
punch per period.
sh
>
> I'm also in the middle of TAG, don't forget. Karen, you
> stinker, you
> gave me too much again! Is it my imagination or are
> Amano's articles
> getting longer and longer?
Send back and ask Amano for one last edit-wash ... whoops,
can't do that with him, can we?
sh
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