Thanks. This is very helpful. Some clarifications in 
  [brackets] below
----- Original Message ----
From: Erik Olson 
  <
erik@thekrib.com>
To: Aquatic 
  Gardeners Association Board <
aga-sc@thekrib.com>
Sent: Saturday, 
  November 18, 2006 8:39:40 PM
Subject: Re: [AGA-sc] Draft Convention 
  Report
  
Rockin!  Thanks for all the hard work.  I actually 
  read through the whole 
thing (much to the chagrin of my family in the 
  other room).
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Minor note: if including aquaforest in IA 
  donors, also include ADG, as 
they donated tank and sand.
   
  [got it]
page 6, "AG2K3 granted..." maybe do a global search on 
  AGA2K3.
  [Oy! Fixed them]
also page 6, "The 
  financial results for 2004 include..." 2004?
  [Same Oy -- that's what I get for not having my wife 
  do her usual proof read]
p9: I don't understand how banquet 
  & presentation rooms cost $1600.89. 
Shouldn't it have been more like 
  the 3500 you mention on the previous 
page.  Or did I miss a 
  paragraph?
   
  [Okay, this tells me I need to redo the numbers so 
  that this is clear. It's obviously a muddled presentation now. I'll keep the 
  rooms and banq entirely separate -- it means redoing a bunch of refences inthe 
  spreadsheets and links but the stuff isn't any good if it isn't clear.  
  You're right about the amount but that dang liquidated damages credit comes 
  into play. If you ignore the line item "Meeting Rooms" and think of the 
  expense line item for "Banq and Rooms" as the entry for both, throw inthe 
  $1,800 credit there, and you'll get to the number shown. I'll make this more 
  straightforward.]
page 10.  Shirt sales should have 
  been a loss, because we gave them to 
volunteers, and paid about 
  $900.  Not sure how the $336 number is 
calculated.  Is 
  that per-shirt cost?  Hmm... (OK, on page 11 you explain 
it) I 
  sort of look at it that the purchased shirts were a way to offset 
the 
  overall cost of printing the run of 72.  So it's a net loss on the 
  
shirts of around $350 as opposed to a profit of $203.  We would 
  never have 
sold all 72 shirts, so I can't realistically look at it as a 
  profit. 
Perhaps the answer is somewhere in between.  Doesn't 
  matter. :)
  [I can make this clearer too. I could have just 
  treated the shirts as one thing. But we sold shirts and they were a good deal 
  and we knew we weere going to give most away without any return on them. The 
  sirts weren't inthe budget at all so I thought I could go ahead and treat the 
  ggift shirts as one item and the sale shirts as another -- separate the gifts 
  from the sales shirts. On the gifts there was no revenue and no corresponding 
  revenue line item. I tried to explain this treatment with the discussion but 
  didn't do a very good job. I'll talk it over to Cheryl and think of a better 
  treatment.]
  
Comment on field trip at bottom of page.  Not sure the 
  purpose of the 
downer message on the field trip.  Making $500 on 
  a $1300 expenditure 
isn't too shabby in reality!
   
  [Oops. It wasn't meant to sound like a downer. I'll 
  make some changes to avoid that import in the text]
p.11 AGA2K3 
  again.  Did they have a cash bar?  I thought we 
  didn't.
p.11 Raffle.  Those tickets were provided by ME, not 
  tropica. :) They cost 
about $8. That's part of that $30 of misc. office 
  depot expenses.
   
  [Laughing at myself here while I bang my forhead on 
  the desk. Karen told me give Troels a "Receipt for $50 for the 
  raffle tickets."  With the insight of John Maynard Keynes, I thought he 
  wanted something to show he had bought and provided the tickets--and that's 
  how I wrote out the receipt and Troels read it and said, "Fine." So, let 
  me think harder here -- is the case actually that they bought $50 worth 
  of chances on the Aquarium and needed proof of that for the expense account? 
  Okay, yes, that makes all kinds more sense. The other way sounds pretty 
  silly now. I can straighten that out as soon as the swelling on my forhead 
  subsides.]
p.14 Ooh, you counted the TFH ad as part of 
  AGA2K6?  Cool.
   
  [We bought six ads  I was going to charge the 
  4 that ran preconvention to the AGA2K6 but when I checked with 
  Cheryl said two were for AGA2K6, two were contest, and two were 
  TAG. Honestly, I looked for all reasonably attrbutable costs. Got any 
  AGA2K6-related ATM fees? DVD label ink use? Scotch tape? Mechanical pencil 
  leads? Any speaker meals?]
   
  Thanks, again,
  The your comments and corrections will 
  definitely make for a better report. That won't get you a cup of 
  coffee but better matters.
   
  sh