RE: Proposal

["Ron" <rondu@mindspring.com>]

James


Sorry for being late with my comments.  Its been a busy week and computer time
was nil.

You have done a bang-up job.  If I tried that, I would have so many typing
errors nobody would understand what I was talking about.  A big thumbs-up to
you.

My wife also read the proposal and liked the idea of a CDrom for sale to
interested people.  A thought just accured that including a copy of the CDrom
to winners as part of the prize might be nice.

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> Date: Mon, 10 Jan 2000 08:03:01 -0600
> From: "James Purchase" <jpurch@interlog.com>
> Subject: RE: Proposal
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> Hi everyone,
>
> > Looks great!  I'm glad you have such a way with words, James!  I wish I
> > could write as well as you.
>
> Thanks Dave, it isn't as easy as it looks.
>
[SNIP]
>
> Mike G. also gave some feedback:
>
> > And I found what appears to be a typo on page 20, under
> > "composition, use of
> > color,etc" there are some iii's left in there.  :-)
>
> I just checked my copy of the PDF file, and I don't see this. However, it
> DOES appear on my copy of the MS Word doc. I have corrected the problem and
> it won't be in the final Proposal.

I have to agree with Dave Engle.

I have a hard copy of the PDF proposal in front of me and the *iii* appear
under Composition, Balance, Use of Space...etc. second bullet down,beginning
of second line. just before "Is space within the aquarium used
effectively?..."

Just confirmation.

I did not read the MS Word doc.
.
[SNIP]

> > That is it.  Please don't take the ticky tacky stuff the wrong way.  I am
> > in no way trying to tear down your exhilirating work, James.
>
> The issues you have raised are EXACTLY the issues which I WANT raised at
> this point in time. This is part of the "polishing" phase, and is very
> important. Don't worry about hurting MY feelings - this is OUR Proposal, I'm
> just the parrot. <g>
>
>
> Thanks guys - this is GREAT. I want more comments from everyone. Let's get
> this done RIGHT.
>
> James Purchase
> Toronto
>
> ------------------------------

I am in full agreement with all positive comments made. WELL DONE!!!!!

Ron Dubbs
Brighton,  TN


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