Cheryl's edits amounted to a lot of improvements in the
existing content and some very good addittions, espeically
in the welcome I registration parts.
On top of that, she reordered the job list so I reordered
the job sections to match that order. I was unhappy with
the structure before but I think it's pretty good now.
I suggest that I send Tom and Dave the doc with a note that
additional revisions can be expected but that 90% of the
substance is very unlikely to change.
I say that having in mind that some of Cheryl's edits make
the improvements that others have been contemplating. I
know Karen has been working on the document and I don't
want circumvent her input. My concern is that the CA folks
think we're a bulky bureaucracy that can't move things
along -- and more, that they don't lose any steam waiting
for the document.
Could be I'm jsut anervous nellie.
sh
--- Erik Olson <erik@thekrib.com> wrote:
FWIW, I was fine with the proposal Scott sent (sans a few
typos). Haven't
had time to check Cheryl's edits yet, but I'm OK sending
them what we have
if it'll help move things along!
- Erik
On Sun, 2 Jan 2005, Phil Edwards wrote:
Yes they are. Tom told me that they're waiting for it.
From: "S. Hieber" <shieber@yahoo.com>
Reply-To: AGA Advisory Committee <aga-mcm@thekrib.com>
To: AGA Advisory Committee <aga-mcm@thekrib.com>
Subject: [AGA-mcm] Proposal Doc
Date: Sun, 2 Jan 2005 10:47:17 -0800 (PST)
Think the California folks are still hungry for a
proposal
doc?
sh
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