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Re: [AGA-mcm] Proposal Doc



I agree we should send it. I thought the Requirements part was pretty good in the first place. The Guidelines, well, they are just hints and suggestions, right? Since that part is open to discussion, it doesn't matter whether it's 100% "right."

I worry that I have added too much. But it's easier to edit out than write. I based a career on it!

Cheryl

S. Hieber wrote:
Cheryl's edits amounted to a lot of improvements in the
existing content and some very good addittions, espeically
in the welcome I registration parts.

On top of that, she reordered the job list so I reordered
the job sections to match that order. I was unhappy with
the structure before but I think it's pretty good now.

I suggest that I send Tom and Dave the doc with a note that
additional revisions can be expected but that 90% of the
substance is very unlikely to change.

I say that having in mind that some of Cheryl's edits make
the improvements that others have been contemplating. I
know Karen has been working on the document and I don't
want circumvent her input. My concern is that the CA folks
think we're a bulky bureaucracy that can't move things
along -- and more, that they don't lose any steam waiting
for the document.

Could be I'm jsut anervous nellie.

sh




--- Erik Olson <erik@thekrib.com> wrote:


FWIW, I was fine with the proposal Scott sent (sans a few
typos). Haven't had time to check Cheryl's edits yet, but I'm OK sending them what we have if it'll help move things along!

  - Erik

On Sun, 2 Jan 2005, Phil Edwards wrote:


Yes they are.  Tom told me that they're waiting for it.


From: "S. Hieber" <shieber@yahoo.com>
Reply-To: AGA Advisory Committee <aga-mcm@thekrib.com>
To: AGA Advisory Committee <aga-mcm@thekrib.com>
Subject: [AGA-mcm] Proposal Doc
Date: Sun, 2 Jan 2005 10:47:17 -0800 (PST)

Think the California folks are still hungry for a

proposal

doc?

sh
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